geese

green and blue, grey and brown
geese a-dreaming on the ground
by the river flowing down
green and blue, grey and brown

4 thoughts on “geese”

Lizzie Ross October 14, 2014 at 3:16 pm

Lovely composition. I like how the geese echo the roughness of other layers — the distant shore, and the washed-up flotsam on the shingle.

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calmgrove Post authorOctober 14, 2014 at 5:27 pm

Thank you, that’s it exactly!

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Mike October 21, 2014 at 2:24 am

Delightful! The repetition enhances the palette and it was quaintly inventive of you to use the ‘a-hyphen’ as a verbal centerpiece. Major kudos CG.

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calmgrove Post authorOctober 21, 2014 at 6:29 am

Thanks, Mike! ‘Quaintly inventive’ — I’ll take that! And glad you spotted the repetitive banding designed to echo that of the picture.

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